Oh and your plotting totally makes sense to me. Earlier today I was telling my friend Jess that that is how I write. I plan it.. sorta. I know where I want the story to end up and I know what certain things have to happen in between the beginning and the end to make it just right, but most of the stuff is kind of thrown in there and made up as I update... I put in a lot of new stuff before I post and I re-write alllll the time. (Even stuff like simple dialogue, haha)
Hah, yeah I figured it would come into the story a little later, especially since she asked Leo about it before.
I'm really enjoying the story, actually! I'm always burning with the curiosity when I think back to the VERY beginning... and I can't wait to see what happens that leads to that! Can't wait for the new updates :)
I wrote a comment on the story, but I'm not really all that sure that you'll get it, so I figured I'd better comment here as well :)
Anywho, in case you don't get it, what I said was I can't help but wonder how Aiden is feeling about Leo... with them all hanging out and all (and especially after the nighttime cuddle incident) I thought there would be some sort of drama. Are they just completely ignoring each other?