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  • sloshopgirl.

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    I actually really enjoyed reading from Leo's point of view.. great update. :)
    May 28th, 2009 at 11:22pm
  • roar;

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    nah it's alright :]
    May 22nd, 2009 at 12:58am
  • roar;

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    thank you

    and i am i'm working on chapter 22 right now and hopefully it will be posted tonight or early tomorrow
    May 21st, 2009 at 11:19pm
  • roar;

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    lol

    are you enjoying my story

    if you would like for anything to happen in the story that you would like to read about just tell me and i will try to fit it in
    May 21st, 2009 at 04:43pm
  • Ms.Marauder

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    Thank you, love! You look like a very suave French girl in that picture, by the way! Hehe!
    May 21st, 2009 at 05:20am
  • sloshopgirl.

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    Ooh, that was a fabulous update! I'm starting to warm up to Leo a bit more after that one :)
    May 21st, 2009 at 05:08am
  • EffieXSteffie

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    hopefully you do enjoy them all :)
    May 14th, 2009 at 09:41pm
  • reedus

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    Oooh, cool! ^_^

    I'm glad you like it :)
    May 13th, 2009 at 04:46pm
  • red hands.

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    Thanks for the comment about my story. =)

    I'll make sure to update later today .
    May 6th, 2009 at 03:52pm
  • sloshopgirl.

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    Oh and your plotting totally makes sense to me. Earlier today I was telling my friend Jess that that is how I write. I plan it.. sorta. I know where I want the story to end up and I know what certain things have to happen in between the beginning and the end to make it just right, but most of the stuff is kind of thrown in there and made up as I update... I put in a lot of new stuff before I post and I re-write alllll the time. (Even stuff like simple dialogue, haha)
    May 6th, 2009 at 07:05am
  • sloshopgirl.

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    Ahh I loved the second update. I'm starting to warm up to Leo as well.. although I am still more partial to Aiden.. heh.
    May 6th, 2009 at 07:02am
  • sloshopgirl.

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    Hah, yeah I figured it would come into the story a little later, especially since she asked Leo about it before.
    I'm really enjoying the story, actually! I'm always burning with the curiosity when I think back to the VERY beginning... and I can't wait to see what happens that leads to that! Can't wait for the new updates :)
    May 6th, 2009 at 03:53am
  • sloshopgirl.

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    I wrote a comment on the story, but I'm not really all that sure that you'll get it, so I figured I'd better comment here as well :)

    Anywho, in case you don't get it, what I said was I can't help but wonder how Aiden is feeling about Leo... with them all hanging out and all (and especially after the nighttime cuddle incident) I thought there would be some sort of drama. Are they just completely ignoring each other?
    May 6th, 2009 at 01:45am
  • ladyvader

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    Thank you for the story comment :). It means a ton. Seriously. And I'm already working on the next chapter.
    April 28th, 2009 at 04:26pm
  • roar;

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    i will i will and thank you so much
    it means a lot!
    April 28th, 2009 at 04:15pm
  • roar;

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    ohmygosh thanks so much :D

    subscribe if you like :]
    April 28th, 2009 at 03:23am
  • roar;

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    awwww you are thank you so much :]
    April 23rd, 2009 at 04:03pm
  • sloshopgirl.

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    Nahh, it's not rubbish at all! Sometimes just writing whatever comes to mind first is the best way to go. I get so much material like that :)
    April 21st, 2009 at 07:44am
  • sloshopgirl.

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    No worries, haha.
    I can get to them and read them with no issues :)
    April 9th, 2009 at 03:48am
  • ladyvader

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    Thank you for the story comment!
    April 8th, 2009 at 04:11pm