Oliver Twist / Comments

yeah, he's from Liverpool, so i don't really know... but i think i'll go back through the story right now and fix the accents. i shall.

i hope everything is okay, but i tried looking stuff up and either there was no information or too much information, so i'm just hoping it'll all be alright, i suppose.

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE LIST. i'll make sure to save/use this when editing/writing. C=

and you didn't seem rude! i asked for constructive criticism, and you gave it. ^.^

to answer all of your points:

okay, yeah. i understand, but right now the story is kind of focusing on Sascha and Theta's relationship; Loren is more or less just there for now... haha.

really?! -sigh- i guess since i'm the one writing it, i understand, but i just don't know if i want to drop it. you're the only person that's said something so far, but i'll ask people in the author's note yay or nay for the accent. oh, and i don't really know a lot of British slang words... i mean, i google some(lame, yeah?) but i don't really know any British people, and the lists are so long that i don't really know what to say. could you perhaps give me a list of the most commonly used British slang? if you want to.

haha, thank you very much for the critiques. i really appreciate it!

Hahahaha. Yeah I get it. I'm not the best skiier. My friend Kallis, is amazing though >
Hm, no. I came here to talk. I don't really write much.
Hahahaha.

Uh, well that's good :3 I'm glad you've
had a lovely day. :D

Don't procrastinate!

And no not really. We'll see when it gets here.(: You?

Hahaha, ah yeah xD
I know how to skii. But like I'm not that good at it.

LOL. XD That's funny.

Good, yours?

I am having a very wonderful day thank you.(: You?

Nope. Hahaha.

Naw, I love my home.

Hahaha, yeah. I love it here :3

Yeah it doess.

Lol.

Haha, thanks.

And again thanks (:

uh,
thanks

ah. lol i wonder if i changed it to female, would it be to late? D:

thank you!
i'm Sunday. :D

yeeah, i've wrote the same comment back a couple of times it does get pretty boring after a while. and i figured they were preteen girls i was looking at the ages on some on their profiles. but i have a boyfriend... lol do they not read?

I wish you nothing but good luck and understanding my friend. I somehow fear that you will need it soon.

thanks.
it abnormal writing for me also.
i just tried it out.

Oh wow...thanks a lot xD

That's a good way to look at it.
Sorry this reply is going to be rather bland, but I'm not very 'right' at the current moment.
And yes, I wish to go to thr moon one day.... get lost in the beauty of thr stars around me.

Im gonna go searching for one now.
I wanna try it out.

You know, you don't have to notify me as a stranger, my name is Hathway. But if that is what you wish, have with it.
People tend to laugh at my little dance.
And no, I do plan on starting German next year though, and I know a bit of rough Spanish.

There's this resturant near the beach here that sells turtle stuff to eat.
I think I should try it now!
:D

No I haven't...
What is it?