Fading Away - Comments

  • xKitsunex

    xKitsunex (100)

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    This Poems Really Good,You Is Well A Good Writer xxx
    February 12th, 2008 at 05:23pm
  • Deceptive Cadence

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    I like this a lot. The imagery is really simple and effective and it's very intense and meaningful as a whole. Keep writing!
    September 14th, 2007 at 09:59am
  • Blooregard Q. Kazoo

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    Cuz there’s no happiness left
    To put in melodramatic songs

    ^-- i especially like this line.
    great poem! Clap
    September 14th, 2007 at 09:38am