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  • D3FIN3D

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    This is really good!!
    i mean i can actually picture this!! :)
    Awesome job!! Keep it up!! :D
    July 26th, 2010 at 04:01am
  • writer_princess

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    This is a really good poem! I love the idea of someone appearing perfect but having a lot of problems. My suggestions are to shorten it and make it more subtle. Great job!
    June 18th, 2009 at 10:14pm
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