Thinking of Him - Comments

  • I Feel Like Koda

    I Feel Like Koda (100)

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    This is really good. You have a lot of talent. I like the repetitiveness. It really gets the message across.
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    April 30th, 2011 at 06:22pm
  • iluvzya6558

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    i agree with double cross. the 'i think of him' makes the poem really nice. [: keep writing! you're talented.
    September 25th, 2010 at 04:38am
  • Ave.Maria.

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    I like this poem, the repetition of 'I think of him' is very effective :)
    July 18th, 2010 at 03:16pm