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Bridgesmademyday (150)

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No, don't write anymore! Some poems don't need much at all and they can send such a good message, and this is oneof them.

September 12th, 2007 at 10:32am

Sazor (150)

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i never thought a poem so short could be so good, and make so much sense

September 4th, 2007 at 10:28am

tearsofblood (100)

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awesome start....it could turn into something really cool

August 30th, 2007 at 10:29am

BabyBaker (100)

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oooh I loooove it!:D
if you added more
i'm sure you could turn it into a killer songXDD

August 30th, 2007 at 09:44am

Teh Manda (200)

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I like the way you word things. A little short for me, but hey. it's still good.

August 30th, 2007 at 09:25am

Toasty. (100)

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Whoa. =D
I agree with SilentlyxScreaming.
Kickass job! =D

August 30th, 2007 at 09:02am

SilentlyxScreaming (100)

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holy shit.
i didnt think i would like it because it was short and all, but i really loved it. you did an amazing job and your a lovely poet. i would add a bit more though. great job =]

August 30th, 2007 at 08:51am