aww man I thought it was just a poem about getting along with your parents and them the last couple of lines really shocked me
shock factor is good!
keep on writing
Aww...
That was so sad. I have problems with my mom, and that REALLY spoke to me. You're so good, I'm glad that eMO! sent me here, she's right.
You're an excellent writer.
that was a really sweet poem. it was well-written, and you rhymed it well.
aww, i love you em. you are a good writer, even when you don't think you are.
The last few lines shocked me too, tbh.
<3