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oooohooooooh i read this one!!! u txted it to me!!! me likes it a lot!!!

hahaha, people seem to like this one better.
leave comments, i like feedback.
and remember these, ill be famous someday.

I like this a lot.
Your rhyming is very impressive, and I love your word choice.
My favorite lines were:
..."im putting up a fight, cause i cant be wrong...
if it keeps us up all night, become the song...
singing for the deaf, praying for the damned......"

These were the lines that really captured and held my attention.
Great Job! : )