Sleep. - Comments

paiige102 (100)

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What I got from this poem, is that something bad happened,
so you tried to go to sleep to forget about it...
but you know that when you wake up,
it will always be there, waiting for you

June 27th, 2009 at 12:17am

tarynwms (100)

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This is really good. I like it! A++

June 26th, 2009 at 10:38pm

rkbkbnrobb (100)

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Awesome, again. Very good!

June 26th, 2009 at 09:27pm

Bleed? (100)

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WOW! seems almost like you start in a dream but in the end you find out its only a dream and that dream becomes a personal nightmare. Well that is what I get from this poem. Very well written. ^_^

Stacie

June 26th, 2009 at 11:57am