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  • lover of the moon

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    i loved it ..it was good
    July 19th, 2009 at 07:53pm
  • paiige102

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    I love it!
    As well as the others
    :D
    June 27th, 2009 at 07:08am
  • Secret__Crush

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    i love this. you dont even need to finish it. i think its perfect since life isnt over, and if your living a dream then its unfinished
    June 27th, 2009 at 04:06am
  • Jarrath

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    i think its nice the way it is, but you should post the finished form of this in a different poem, it looks as though it's heading somewhere good.
    June 27th, 2009 at 03:49am
  • writer_princess

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    This is really cool! I love how you blur the lines between a dream and reality.
    June 27th, 2009 at 03:30am
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