The Beat of Confusion - Comments

I will not destroy no pain
I will not ease any sorrow
I will not stop the destruction
For life is destruction
but I offer you my confusion
so twisted, so horrid, so bleak, so surreal
but I offer you the confusion of my beat
Mon ange Mon libertine


i love the way you refuse the pain and sorrow, i think its amazing

awesome!!!!!!

Man, i'm glad you asked me to read this. This was WONDERFUL! You're right, it is very very different and it's unique! I absolutely love different. So many poems on here are exactly the same.

I loved the repetition of "beat" and the different ways you used it. It was just very beautiful and descriptive. I hardly ever like poems that don't have a rhyming scheme, but this i really loved. Poems that don't rhyme usually bore me, and i just skim over them picking out words here and there. But with your poem, and i went back and read each line, really taking in what you were trying to say.

It kept my interest. Lovely! You have a beautiful vocabulary.