Broken Heart - Comments

  • bloodyRain210

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    youre really good, ill read more. when i have time, sorry. =)
    October 2nd, 2009 at 10:52pm
  • RJVanity

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    I IS JELOUS I WISH I COULD WRITE AS GOOD AS YOU
    August 13th, 2009 at 12:25pm
  • Ivy-kun

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    the ending was sad but it was great nonetheless!
    August 11th, 2009 at 07:54pm
  • The Angel of Irony

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    Very Very good
    August 2nd, 2009 at 11:07pm
  • WingsofDust

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    Another I like, it's the rhyming. Poems that rhyme in some way makes so much more sense to me XD
    Stroke like, I think it's great.
    August 2nd, 2009 at 04:01pm
  • Slayer

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    just amazing
    July 26th, 2009 at 12:35am
  • rebaaax3

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    brilliant
    July 24th, 2009 at 01:30am
  • DivineDesire

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    Beautifully written...and exactly how I feel at the moment. A wonderful job...Kudos to you <3
    July 23rd, 2009 at 08:21am
  • XxJackyxX

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    Awesome poem you can really relate to it
    July 22nd, 2009 at 07:34pm
  • I'm Incomplete

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    OMG i like how you make it sound rhymed, it is nice bcuz i've felt like this one to x] i think this one is my fav. good work!
    July 21st, 2009 at 06:25pm
  • JustShrugAtlas

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    beautifully writen
    July 10th, 2009 at 11:16am
  • Purple_Lemur ._.

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    this is an amazing poem...good job
    July 9th, 2009 at 04:36pm
  • misguided ghost;;

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    Amazing Poem. (L)
    July 8th, 2009 at 06:06pm
  • Prophylactic

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    This poem is beautiful.
    I love how you described it, it really makes you think about the pain of it.

    Amazing, keep writing. <3
    July 8th, 2009 at 04:12pm