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  • Rasha345

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    I like it, O.o I think believe it would be easier to pick up the rythm if you were to cut it into verses (Which I noticed you did do, every four lines) So if you just put a space in between them it would make it easier to read.

    Anyways, good poem.
    July 16th, 2009 at 10:45pm
  • RoseWidow

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    depressing...
    July 13th, 2009 at 10:03am
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