Sick Game - Comments

Wow, scary. But epic :D

Ah,

: ) My how true this is.
Men and women alike can be avaricious in various ways. This is one that many succumb and become victim to. :3

nice : )

you're poems are relly captivating, they make you feel like your the one its happeneing to

love it :]
except choose should be choice, i think

It flows rather evenly except for stanza three.
The 3rd line in every stanze rhymed with 'game' except that one.

Also the first stanza sounds best because its goes AAB then the second goes CDD and that throws me off.

Little tweaks here and there couldnt hurt right?

Please don't take this the wrong way, and if you want nothing to do with what I just said don't reply and just ignore me.