Human Nature - Comments

BetweenRealms (100)

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Very nice. I like the whole theme of it. I'm kinda struggling with that kind of thing.

October 10th, 2009 at 05:39am

book-keeper26 (100)

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sweet you used me in the first line!!!!

August 17th, 2009 at 09:30pm

Bedlam's pioneer (100)

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I also liked how you used fairy tales, and I liked how well the line 'And I'm not here for your amusement or pleasure' fit in like a story book. My favorites lines were 'Looks like Sleeping Beauty got her kiss, I threw an arrow, but I guess it missed.' Well done!

July 24th, 2009 at 06:00am

Freshly squeezed (100)

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I really like how you used fairy tales.

July 24th, 2009 at 05:37am