I really wish you'd just break my heart already. - Comments

  • InebriatedLover

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    I absolutly adore the begining sentences, they really reeled me in. good poem.
    July 27th, 2009 at 08:32am
  • Okubukai

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    yes, this is well written!
    July 25th, 2009 at 04:51am
  • whenwewere;;inlove

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    this is SOOO good!! i love it! :) if you have time, it would be super coooool for you to check out my poems/lyrics as well. keep up the good work!
    July 25th, 2009 at 04:31am