October 12th, 2011 at 09:03am
That was really good. I found it kind of unoriginal at times, but overall I actually really liked it! And the ending was the best part, which is always good. If you end it really goo that's usually the part I remember. :)
Great job!
This is just one of them poems that makes you do what I just did its just so sweet and cute and just lovly and you rhymed it very well just where it needed to be done, I swear I'm in love with your poems