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  • second-hand smoke

    second-hand smoke (150)

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    good structure paired with beautiful words.
    exceptional! :)
    December 30th, 2010 at 10:50pm
  • Intellectual Lullaby

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    That....was FRICKENNNN AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEE to read.
    I read it in my head, and then aloud because the words rolled off my tongue it was beautiful.

    My favorite line, "Mister Moon drops his endless tears
    As millions of glittering stars"
    and of course the last line.

    The comparisons were quite creative and beautiful.
    Nice Job!
    December 30th, 2010 at 12:48am
  • Wanderlust.

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    I love this poem, my favorite part is "Mister Moon drops his endless tears
    As millions of glittering stars"
    February 7th, 2010 at 08:15am
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