July 31st, 2009 at 04:43am
It's a good poem , It ended happier then I thought it would ^_^ So I'm glad to see that ...
It looks like in some parts you were trying to make it rhyme, I think if you just changed the order of the lines a little it would help. But it's still a good poem ^_^ Nice job ^_^
Oh, and can you believe he actually talks to me like a normal person again ? Although he wants me to send him a picture of myself . . . Again . .