Once upon a dream. - Comments

Thanks for entering!
I love your structure and rhyme scheme.
Simple, yet incredibly effective.
And I love the image too.
It [i]worked[/i] if that makes any sense.

I like this poem.

I like the way it was phrased and I can relate alot right now...

I like the poem. I can relate a little, and I liked the way you phrased it. I like it even though it's sad.

Good job. =]

wow!
this poem is amazing!
i love it!

''I had no other option
but to forget about you.''
When i read that I so could see this black&white french movie scene, with a girl putting out a cigarette. Smoke rising up from the ash tray, and then the whole scene fades away. I am so visual when reading poems.

You could be so much more visual when writing poems. Don't get me wrong, your poem is brilliant but I just think you could try and put a bit of ''visuality'' in them, describe the fog like it were the forgiveness..grey and tick and cold...

Understand what I'm trying to say ? No doubt tho your poems are really good, they are clear, naive almost, just the pure feelings and emotions. And that's good, but you could add some visual nonsense to them and make em, dunno serious.
lol. I'm not that good at writing poem reviews.

the metaphors were really great, very realistic. beautiful.

Holy crapola.
:cheese:

THAT WAS SENSATIONAL!
<3

:cheese:
Wow, that was amazing.

Wow that's quite sad but awesomely written
i really like this one ! once again you got talent!

Hi there
I really like your poem, it's sad and beautiful, I think you're a good writer!

It's brill
Great
Fabulos
Breath-taking
Word-stealing
I can really relate to this

i ♥

its awesome.

= ]

[b]I'M STEALING YOUR COMMENT VIRGINITY.


Anyways,

I really liked that. :D[/b]