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Khrist
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Breathing increased.
Increasing more.
I didn't like that. You really can't use the same word twice... sorry it's just...
I agree. Creative and artsy. I liked the last few lines.
It was easy to follow and it was deep.
It just needs a little bit of tuning up with the vocabulary :)
But I like it!
August 26th, 2007 at 01:52pm
ending.endearment.
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[quote="Murphey_Romance"]Veryy creative and i like it alot =)[/quote]
It's short but powerful and says alot.
i really like it
keep it up
August 26th, 2007 at 12:57pm
Murphey_Romance
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Veryy creative and i like it alot =)
August 26th, 2007 at 12:53pm
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Increasing more.
I didn't like that. You really can't use the same word twice... sorry it's just...
I agree. Creative and artsy. I liked the last few lines.
It was easy to follow and it was deep.
It just needs a little bit of tuning up with the vocabulary :)
But I like it!