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  • cannibal.

    cannibal. (145)

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    I feel kind of bad because I thought this poem was about one person specifically. Once I read through the stanza about your brother I realized it wasn't I I re-read it again. The stanzas concerning your brother and father are the ones that stood out the most to me. I learned not to put faith in friends let alone teachers but family is always supposed to be there for you. If I had just joined the site and read this I'd think it was creepy how similar they were to my own brother and father. Most families tend to be damaged though so it seems normal. I hate to put it that way and make it seem like I'm clumping all families together.

    The poem pulled a heart string (rare with me) and I really liked it despite being so sad and slightly resentful sounding. I do apologize for leaving you a long comment though. That really wasn't intended.
    October 21st, 2011 at 11:05pm
  • Anotherday

    Anotherday (100)

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    I love this poem - your a brillaint writer ,
    June 26th, 2011 at 12:07am