One Imperfection. - Comments

I'm glad that I joined that Non-fanfiction Club, because I don't think I would've found your poems otherwise.
And they are really good!

[i]I can't help but to fall in lust with you[/i]
^ I liked how you used ‘lust’ instead of ‘love’. It gives the poem more character…and gives the reader more of an idea of what it’s about.

Once again your poetry amazes! you really have a talent even if you don't think you do!!

I liked the flow and the rhyming pattern. I love the way you were the person doing the rjecting as it is often the other way round in poetry.
amazing stuff.

[quote="Peter Petrelli."]I liked it. It was worded beautifully :][/quote]
awesome.

rOaCh...x
♥

I liked it. It was worded beautifully :]