Cyanotic Lips. - Comments

unLucky Clover (100)

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Lol, yeah, it should be [i]lose[/i].

August 26th, 2009 at 10:07am

souffrir de amour. (150)

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As your lips touched with mine,
You suddenly stopped time.
Escaping from this deceptive reality,
You're making me lost my vitality.

is it LOST or LOSE? Please correct me if I'm wrong. Thanks. :]

August 15th, 2009 at 05:02pm

MoonlitTearsOfLove (100)

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I liked it. This was excellent . I love your word choice and the rhyming.. it was like baking a cake, and it turning out perfect, cause all the elements melted together just right

August 10th, 2009 at 06:22am

souffrir de amour. (150)

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Awe, thanks everyone. Really appreciated all your comments. *hugs!*

August 6th, 2009 at 02:19pm

silenceallaround (100)

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gling mo tlga ate vieve!!!!

August 6th, 2009 at 05:50am

thegirlinblack41 (100)

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I don't exactly know what to say except that this was so good i almost started to cry. I know what it is like to have someones kiss be so powerful and than they go running back to there girlfriend.

August 5th, 2009 at 10:43pm

unLucky Clover (100)

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Wow. I loved it! I really can't describe it in words ... But I loved the metaphors and as usual, your style. Great job. =)

August 5th, 2009 at 02:44pm

Mint_Slice (100)

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Amazing. ^_^

August 5th, 2009 at 10:50am