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  • justjaywalk

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    I like this.
    I really do.
    However, "We'll say a pray..." bothers me. It's improper. Prayer. It should be prayer.

    Overall, I like how this is short, not-so-sweet and to-the-point. (:
    September 26th, 2009 at 09:21pm
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