Is Daisuki someone's name? If it is, I like how this poem is constantly trying to call out to Dausuki, trying to get them to understand, trying to tell them something. That coupled with the style of writing makes this poem mysterious in some ways.
Wow! The way you repeated the word Daisuki made it feel like the character was confused and really did feel it. Too strongly that she just had to say it over and over. Is it from a show?