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wwegal1
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u use such good words in ur poems which make it seem more alive and relatable! great job keep writing!! 5/5!
October 4th, 2009 at 07:48am
Pupil of Nivishire
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Amazing, much better than mine, which is more story/poem, so good job, keep up the good work!
August 17th, 2009 at 11:51pm
WingsofDust
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I like the first line best, souch a strong introduction ^^
I'm also able to relate to thist which makes it all feel more personal.
August 16th, 2009 at 05:33pm
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