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  • wwegal1

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    u use such good words in ur poems which make it seem more alive and relatable! great job keep writing!! 5/5!
    October 4th, 2009 at 07:48am
  • Pupil of Nivishire

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    Amazing, much better than mine, which is more story/poem, so good job, keep up the good work!
    August 17th, 2009 at 11:51pm
  • WingsofDust

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    I like the first line best, souch a strong introduction ^^
    I'm also able to relate to thist which makes it all feel more personal.
    August 16th, 2009 at 05:33pm
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