Beautiful Girl (Jealousy) - Comments

Aww that was cool.

I think this must have been taken from a real experience since it has so much heart felt emotion in it.

The descriptions of the girl are indepth and give dimention to the poem, if I was in any place to pass judgement on a poem I would say it was well written but since I'm not I will say it's rad.

i liked the amount of feeling put across in this poem. whilst reading, i could see the girl, and feel the jealousy you were so talentedly writing about. you have amazing skills.

I second Kid-2's motion.

I really liked this poem, and it's one of my favorites now. :] You're a really good poet.

I agree waitingforsomething. It is the honesty that makes this poem so brilliant. Almost like you are assuring yourself.

I know how you feel here, and honestly, when you are away from her, you will see what it is about you that makes you great in your own right.
I bet she can't write like you, and thats her loss.

I loved the honesty in it. Poetry without honesty is nothing, right?

Spammy's talented :]
it was beautiful :]
You have amazzed me again with a double [u]z[/u].

Awwwww. :hug: That was great!

I really like this poem. It's very beautiful, and it shows good emotion. I could [i]feel[/i] it.

That's amazing spammy i really love it !! you have an amazing talent !! :shifty