Perfect Possession - Comments

Perfect wording, perfect emotion in the lines, perfect.
I love this poem, never read another like it...Kind of makes me want to try to write one like it xD
Awesome, definitely one of my favorites =P

Originally this was about parents living through their children, I get most of my inspiration from news and whenever I hear about a mom who throws their kid into a beauty pagent I feel this way.
But it turned out vague and I now you can sort of mold it to whatever you want it to mean.
I definitely know how time flies!

the title makes you think that this is going to be about something you already have but makes you turn back and re-think and I love that about it and about how you want to control the ting you create... but it also gives me the impression that you are trying to make a new and perfect life for yourself and I have to admit I have had that thought running through my head since 9th grade.... about 2 years ago... how time flies huh?