The Scent of You Tonight. - Comments

this one is really good. i love it.

that is beautiful

I read your request in the [b]Poet's Club[/b] and I'm gunna comment some of your poems, as long as you comment my ones! =]

So this is really awesome! You're a really good poet. It's sweet and really beautiful. Yeah, beautiful is the word.

[i]We can believe in tonight
and live for tommorow
and let everyone know
we have no sorrow[/i].

That was my favourite stansa. It's just beautiful and your word choice fits. It was really sweet.
The words sort of just roll off your tongue in that verse cuz it sounds smooth, and I love smooth-sounding poems.

I could tell that you were feeling really lovey-dovey when you wrote this [:tehe:] because it really has a sense of love in the poem.

Really nice. =]

Awesome poem, Iove it!

Wow, I liked this. It was sweet, and really detailed. I especially liked the part :

And don't you know
that I play princess
with you as my knight?

Very nice, well done. =]

really good, I liked it alot.

wow this is really good!!