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  • Donatello;;

    Donatello;; (100)

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    If your going to write , write with meaning and point , I feel like you use some words just so the sentence will sound right , such as

    The tales twist and turn
    Like vines
    Creeping along the side of an old oak

    i didnt see any significant meaning or addition to the poem in these lines, On the plus side the ending is immensley powerful , and i liked this one
    August 23rd, 2009 at 09:21pm
  • MGMTismyfundrug

    MGMTismyfundrug (150)

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    I never thought of a library that way;
    i love it, very well written
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    August 23rd, 2009 at 08:35pm
  • Rain dancer

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    Wow I love your poem its very well written and enchanting
    August 21st, 2009 at 06:45pm
  • MeowAlexRawr

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    love it! so good.
    August 21st, 2009 at 06:02pm
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