The two first stanzas are great, the poem overall is good. I think the second stanza is awesome though. Great wording and rhythm.
Your poem has a nice flow but it sort of falter towards the end of the last stanza. Also the third stanza sticks out a bit. Its structure makes it a bit disjointed form the rest of your poem.
Another thing I liked however is how you repeated the line “Isn’t it expected”. That worked really well.
Your poem has a nice flow but it sort of falter towards the end of the last stanza. Also the third stanza sticks out a bit. Its structure makes it a bit disjointed form the rest of your poem.
Another thing I liked however is how you repeated the line “Isn’t it expected”. That worked really well.
Good job :D