Clouded Vision - Comments

  • It is a start and that is all thats needed for the reader to continue. I truly liked the part where you mentioned insects hitting a lightbulb it made me think of the exact sound. It may not be your most detailed or interestingly titled but it was as fine as the rest yet in a different space entirely.

    CrayonEater
    November 6th, 2009 at 06:53am