The Love - Comments

  • Ferb Fletcher

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    It was a very good topic for you to write on. I thoroughly enjoyed although it took me a couple read throughs to understand the first couple of stanzas. They just weren't very clear. But it had a lot of truth to it, more so than I can find these days and for that it was refreshing. It is well written though and I thank you for writing it. Excellent job!
    December 4th, 2009 at 02:15am
  • jilliannicoletheshiz

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    Great poem! It's very heartfelt and truthful. Thank you for entering it in my contest!
    November 19th, 2009 at 09:24pm
  • twloha_17

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    It was great! I loved it.
    October 11th, 2009 at 05:40pm
  • wwegal1

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    i love it! its soo innocent.. ur a great writer!
    October 4th, 2009 at 07:46am
  • WingsofDust

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    Very likable ^^ I was a little surprised by the length but it worked. Keep your writing up :D
    September 7th, 2009 at 07:04pm
  • Your Holiday;

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    This is amazing.
    You're such a great writer.
    I love it!
    September 6th, 2009 at 06:30am
  • cinty_insanity

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    wow, i love it =) its really good
    September 5th, 2009 at 11:03am