Erase The Silence - Comments

  • ModernWaste

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    @cinty_insanity
    I was inspired by a song to write this, so technically it could be a song, yes.

    @Kyoichi
    I don't really have 1 initial message in this poem. For me it was just trying to break free after being kept silent for so long and not being able to step up and say 'no' for the very first time.
    I'd like my readers to interpret this as anything they want. It doesn't need have 1 direct meaning, as it could be a metaphor for something else.
    September 5th, 2009 at 11:49pm
  • TheGreekMetalHead

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    Pretty good, but I don't see a message.

    Is there a message?
    September 5th, 2009 at 03:13pm
  • cinty_insanity

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    wow this is really good =D i love it. is it a song?? i could se eit as a song...id listen to it. good poem anywayz
    September 5th, 2009 at 12:15pm