Life's Dance, Death's Masque - Comments

Love this!

I liked the short lines; it adds a lot of emotion. Also, in the last four lines, I liked the use of exclamation points mid-line. It's really catching and almost forces the reader to acknowledge the message. I've always felt that the use of punctuation throughout a poem can change the entire tone of the piece.

I didn't notice much use of alliteration in the poem, unfortunately, but it was well-done overall.

I must say,
This poem was astonishingly good.
Loved it, simply loved it.

i typically don't read poems. actually this might be only the third or fourth i've read. but the title caught my eye and i really like it. it's well done and creative.

nice poem u got talent,if you like masquerades chekk out my poems there a bit different in that i use clowns in my poems,but i hope you like em as i did urs~!^^