As A Child - Comments

  • Ferb Fletcher

    Ferb Fletcher (130)

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    Wow, this is really good. You've really captured what it's like for a kid in these words. You've also captured what it feels like to be an adult wishing for one more day to be a free child. Extremely well done!
    December 9th, 2009 at 06:17am
  • BMWbuttercup

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    This poem is amazing, good job!!
    November 22nd, 2009 at 12:20am