Over A Thousand Miles Away - Comments

I can really relate to this.

It was a letter but with a poetic sense, beautiful.

Tre you are AMAZING!

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Well I think this is more of a letter
I found it a bit out of rhytm and more variated vocabulary could make it more interestign

i understand...well done

=] I love it.... 'specially cuz I know who its about too...ily2 Shannon

Wow, it's amazing, the rhyming didn't seem forced and it was quite the pleasure to read, i really enjoyed it, alot of emotion.

That was just so beautiful. I'm at a loss for words right now. I don't don't even know what to say about this other than just beautiful. It made me want to cry.

Wow...

That's beautiful.

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I liked it, very straight forward
good job

It's so different from what I usually read, I'm into hidden messages metaphore type things. Yours is so straight forward, but it hit a chord and almost got me to bawl buckets of tears. I never cry. It takes A LOT for me to cry. I LOVE IT!
Bravo!

aww!
i can relate to that too
D:

*huggles*

Aww that was really sweet :)

I can relate to that..kinda, well..yeah i can.

It's amazing =] <3

Awwww Shannon. :hug:
That's so sweet, and sad, and so..awww-ish.
I know who this is to. :tehe:

Great poem. (:

O_O
Wow.
I can realate [i]exactly[/i] to this...
Like, perfectly relate.
Holy shit.
It was really beautiful.
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This is my poem, Over a Thousand Miles Away.