Clot the bleeding - Comments

This is great (I dont throw that word around to much to other poets) but, it would be a better poem if, where you put all the commas, press enter and change them to stanza's. Then it would look less like a journal entry, and more like a poem.
-Duckie_maybememories xox

This person you're writing to...is very lucky. I love your wording, and heart put into the poem. Awesome job.

Who ever your friend is, they sure are lucky. that is such a sweet peom.

i really like the first line of the second last paragraph.