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  • ely.

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    For one reason or another, I read this repeatedly. :D

    This seems like such a flowy(..?) poem in that there aren't any parts that seem forced or shoved in with the rest. And, as just-rae said, the imagery is awesome.
    September 30th, 2009 at 04:10am
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    amazing. in my head, I kind of pictured someone maybe about to jump...?
    I don't know, but its descriptive imagery is amazing.
    September 30th, 2009 at 03:38am
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