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  • TorturedWings

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    this one was amazing... my favorite poem from now one.. amazing Clap
    September 30th, 2007 at 12:15am
  • the surgeon.

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    that was so good.
    it made me go :shock:
    It was kinda scary :tehe: but still, it was good.

    I liked that last verse a lot. It was my favourite. It was really clever how you put the title as something you say in marriage but this is like, the complete opposite.

    It was dark, but that's what made it good.
    =]
    could you read some of my poems please?
    September 27th, 2007 at 02:29am
  • mankind's last hope?

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    holy shit i loved it! it was brilliant, it set an awesome pace, each line was well structured, the rhyme scheme simply rocked, and how it all fit togethe like a puzzle, astounding. It told a great story too, you can feel the tension of lost love and cold hatred. Iloved the ending alot. I like it alot!
    September 27th, 2007 at 01:56am
  • Sazor

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    WoW.....deep,blunt, AMAZZINGGGG
    September 24th, 2007 at 09:33am
  • Rosebud

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    omg i love this one!
    This is one of my favs for sure!!
    September 24th, 2007 at 05:01am
  • username89474389572

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    *CLAPPPY*
    i love it its simply amazing :)
    September 24th, 2007 at 04:17am
  • FlyingTIGER

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    that is so fuckin awesome
    you have a talent, dear =)
    September 24th, 2007 at 12:21am
  • Faye;

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    sexual.
    Naughty
    September 23rd, 2007 at 10:54pm
  • tornadowatch.

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    wow. that was really, really good
    i loved the last two lines. when i saw the title
    i thought it was going to be some sappy love
    poem. good job at blowing me away, loved it ! =]
    September 23rd, 2007 at 10:41pm
  • Abbyy!

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    OMJ

    wowowowowow
    i love it! XD

    its awesome !!!!!!!!
    September 23rd, 2007 at 10:34pm
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