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  • Ferb Fletcher

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    There are a few general errors, but they don't take away from the meaning of the poem too greatly. Other than that it is extremely well written and thoughtful. There is lots of evidence of effort. Your lines are meaningful and yet unobtrusive. Excellent
    December 7th, 2009 at 07:15am
  • OhaiCookieChan

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    It's such a great poem.
    I like it very much.
    November 7th, 2009 at 02:31am
  • anesthesia

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    Some spelling and punctuation and capitalization errors, but it's a really really good poem! I'm going to bookmark it.
    October 9th, 2009 at 07:35am
  • LOu....!RomeoAngelo!

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    nice...i really like it a lot.... <3
    October 8th, 2009 at 04:53pm
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