manfish - Comments

Wow. Now here's an actual original, interesting poem, about a completely new topic, done in a completely new way. Even the perspective is unique. This is fantastic. It's almost silly, childish, in a sombre and perhaps morbid way. I quite like it. Thank you for being so creative.

thanks :) i said I'll because the 'manfish' was speaking those parts as i was telling a story with the rest of the poem :) i know its really weird but it was years ago and for english :P x

I really like this poem, I don;t really get the manfish part and when it's saying "I'll kill your children, I'll kill your dreams" I would change all the "I'll" to "he'll" But still really like the idea of it