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  • unLucky Clover

    unLucky Clover (100)

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    Amazing. You really are one of the people I truly admire in this site ... I loved it!
    October 11th, 2009 at 04:54am
  • Ha-we

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    i love this. it has meaning!!! its from the heart. thats what im trying to do alot. really great. you should keep writing. Perfect. read my poems, comment mine, tell me wat you think please.
    October 10th, 2009 at 06:51am
  • Duckie_MaybeMemories

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    In these typse of poems I always see the same words used over and over again, but, for some odd reason I liked this poem, the only advise I can give is work on puting things in stanza's, but also keep writing from the heart.
    -Duckie_Maybememories xox
    October 10th, 2009 at 06:40am