i love this. it has meaning!!! its from the heart. thats what im trying to do alot. really great. you should keep writing. Perfect. read my poems, comment mine, tell me wat you think please.
In these typse of poems I always see the same words used over and over again, but, for some odd reason I liked this poem, the only advise I can give is work on puting things in stanza's, but also keep writing from the heart.
-Duckie_Maybememories xox