How Can You... - Comments

That was a really moving poem. It was very easy to relate to. It was very well-written and you could detect a lot of emotion in it even if it wasn't extremely obvious. You had some excellent points in your lines and that is truly wonderful. Way to go!

that explain exactly how i felt last summer.
last year was soo horrible. that the only way that i can describe it.
and then you find hope once the pain dulls. =)

this is great :) I really liked it, it made me cry.
like 'Black_Angel' said I can relate to it too :)

really good poem, i can relate to it...you're a good writer.