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JJNeil1991
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I love the tempo and flow of this poem, it keeps building and building.
I especially like the last two lines, and the part about 'apathetic eyes' - gives it a perfectly gloomy atmosphere to it (if that's what you were going for :D)
July 20th, 2010 at 03:19am
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i started reading it out loud and just couldn't stop it was nothing like i expected and just blew me away
November 4th, 2009 at 05:26am
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I especially like the last two lines, and the part about 'apathetic eyes' - gives it a perfectly gloomy atmosphere to it (if that's what you were going for :D)