Fallen - Comments

I loved how the way the poem, it had this sort of internal rhyme to it. Emotion was very present this poem. How the person feels so lost and dejected. It really struck a chord with me. Here is a little tip though, I sometimes use the five senses in my poems. To help make it more descriptive. But overall I enjoyed this. Btw I remember when I wrote a Fallen Angel poem ~Awww good times. :)

so pretty :)
i loved it <3

This is beautiful.(:

Another very wonderful piece of work! There's a few more typos in this one than I noticed in your others, but they aren't a big deal.
There's also a bit of alliteration, which is pretty cool, though I'm not sure if you meant to do it or not. Either way, you can never go wrong with a dash of alliteration. :D
More lovely imagery, and the metaphors and figurative language laced throughout the entire thing is great.
As usual, you have created a great piece of work, enjoyable and unique and wonderful. :)

This is really beautiful! The poem is really complete and well put together, the writing is amazing :)

Aww.. so amazing <3

this is my favorite ;]

That's a very good poem.
I'd fix the top of paragraph 2, because it doesn't fit real well.