Secret Obsession! - Comments

Very good poem. Short though it gets everything it needs to stay within those few lines. Deep and dark secrets come to mind when I read this. People can relate to it which is one of the reasons people write poetry. Very well done.

Thanks. Glad you liked it.

Tell her, thats all you can do. admiring from afar never gets you anywhere. you can do it . tis is a good poem btw