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  • Benjamin Barker

    Benjamin Barker (105)

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    I really like this, very well written :D
    October 25th, 2009 at 01:50pm
  • its an infestation

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    I really like this,
    its kinda sad, but I think its like heaps amazing :)
    I like the way you started the poem and ended the poem with the same thing :)
    October 25th, 2009 at 01:42pm
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