The White Maiden - Comments

I loved how you used her to represent winter. Another brilliant poem!
Dude, I think I'm in love with you. Let's have babies :D

The imagery here is amazing.
My favorite parts were "they may leave no trace of summer there", "the frost, like starlight, shimmers from the trees", and "child's glitter, scattered on the earth."
Beautiful metaphors. Great poem.

Wow. This is just...wow. I just couldn't look away until I finished reading it. Left me speechless :)

Oh, I loved this. The imagery was absolutely vivid. The White Maiden was a metaphor for winter, but winter was also being personified as a maiden. I really liked your ability to incorporate such poetry terms. There is some rhyming, but it's not overdone, which is great. This was so well-written :)

I really like all the imagery you used within this poem, it suits it very well. I like the description a lot, in fact. It was certainly well-written and I liked how the maiden was a kind of metonymy or metaphor that was tied in really well throughout the entire piece. Well done!

Very detailed, very brillant, and I don't think you could've done better if you had drawn a picture instead. Great work.

I couldn't pull my eyes from this poem! Astonishingly well done! (Everyone says 'amazing' or 'awesome', but I wanted to be origional, so I said 'astonishingly'. Very "POSH", right? haha)

This is absolutely gorgeous! I'm glad you entered this in a contest! Good luck!

wow, this was good...

Very lovely.
I really like this one.
Lots of images.
=)

-Mimi